My Friend
Thinking of you upon waking, remembering your steel blue eyes.Seeing the stranglehold greater powers have forcedyou into:their evil flexing muscle,reminders of fallen Princes,admired and blessedso...
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Great write effusing wonderful imagery. Your use of emphasis is great.Chellew
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The silences in this piece really do serve to emphasize how much the speaker longs for the wholeness and safety of her friend.The short lines suggest a chaste speaker, speaking only what she feels she...
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Q,I read this more as wrathful memories than forgiveness. Sounds like expectoring an old relationship?I felt some confusion between the two feelings.In truth I did not really penetrate your poem.Alex
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Michael~Thank you for your kind reply~!Bob~ Your reply is inspirin'~!Thank you, kindly~!rG~ It's typical.A multi-emotional poem, I suppose.Expectoring an old relationship?No, trying to reach...
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QUIXOTIK He works in mysterious ways and we all need friends these days, good one!!!!!!!!!!!!
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I have read this about five times and still am not sure I get everything, but I get enough to know how skillfully crafted your poem is. Very nice transition from one thought to another and from one...
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